Supervisor's comment and change the plan.

There are many supervisors comment in week1.

-Main supervisor-
1)Organizing exists thesis of golf etiquette to better educate for the junior.
2)Build a scenario according to types of etiquette to better educate for the junior.
3)Propose the scenario by designing a device and interface to achieve effectively.
4)The aim of the study, target, core contents of design, conclusion, and meaning of design should be described by consistent subject, research methods and materials.
He recommended me to find the clear reason of aim of the study.

 

 -Sub supervisor-

1)She recommended me to write the whole process of research to remind my study, and try to put prove where came from.

2)Writing all words of definition is helpful me to understand where I am. 

There is a few comment in week2.

-Main supervisor-

1)Hard to understand cause and effect.

2)Try to approach the aspect of design.

As a result, I have been thinking about what is design in terms of academic. But I cannot understand what is different between academic design and normal design. Supervisor told me that my study is never considered academic things. I think design have to approach more nature than other fields, such as marketing and economy. Also, design has not to make the boundary of all of the parts. For example, physical education could be a part of design. Because the education can be changed people's behavior by introducing a management health app. This is why my study could be a part of design. Design include all of the parts. There is no limitation of the design power. 

Next step will organize definition again, and do ideation.